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          Its Friday, the promise day where me, Yukari and Junpei agreed on discussing about the ghost story of the girl. Yukari give explanation to us about what she gathered in school. I kinda miss the point there and a bit blurry but..what I was shocked that. She wants to go the back Alley that is located at Port Island station to get some field research. I have a bad feeling but I was thrilled about it. It was my first time to go there, so what could go wrong…right?. On the other hand,  Junpei have no choice but to agree following cuz he can’t let two girls going to that place all by themselves. Sometimes Junpei is nice and caring also. He knows what he gotta do. Even so his sometimes being a bit mean. But I know Junpei is a nice guy. So we got a deal and the three of us promise to go tomorrow night. I’m scared but I’m also excited!. Hahahaha.

         The next day…

         “Alright, let’s get going.” Yukari said feeling so pumped up

         “What’s your hurry? …I still think this a bad idea. I mean bringing two girls THERE is like wandering   into a lion’s den with steaks strapped to my face.. How could you afraid of ghost, but not be scared by this..?” Junpei said worrying on about what might happen

         “It’s easy to get freaked out by something you can’t see don’tcha think? Yukari answered calmly

         “Actually, I’m more worried about things I CAN see..like bats and knives.” Junpei answered back

         “*sigh* Big deal, so it’s a little “dangerous”…” Yukari answered it with a bit scared while talking. Still she keep showing her poker face and not to exposed her sacredness to Junpei. “But its going to be a great adventure for us”.

         “Well I do think it’s a bit dangerous Yukari…what Junpei said is true. Even so yesterday I so pumped up” I said while gripping my hand cuz of fear

         “See, even our leader said the same thing.” Junpei said

         “But…I really want to know about what happen to Fuuka. So, to do so we have to go to the Alley and get some information. But just for a short while and yeah ADVENTURE TIME!” I said still gripping my hand but feel  so pumped up and excited!

        “You actually OK WITH THIS!?” He said with a shocked face

         “Hmph, well then.. that’s that. Our leader gave us the word. So Junpei be our hero if we get in trouble ok?” Yukari said with an evil smile on her face

         “Urrrgghhh, If I die..I blame both of you crazy girls.” Junpei said crying and mumbling something to himself

         The three of us have arrived the Alley, some of the people in the Alley doesn’t like Gekkoukan High student. They come to us and said to us not to come here. Junpei was trying to get the atmosphere in a good mood. But Yukari just make then even madder with the word SCUM come out of her mouth. Me and Junpei remind her not to say something like or say something that makes the situation even worse. She didn’t listen but still talk. Then, Junpei got hit by one of them on the stomach. That makes him fall to his knees.
  

         “Junpei!! You ok?” I said holding Junpei

         “Run!” He said still feeling a the pain

         “We can’t just leave you here!” Yukari said trying to lift Junpei up ion his two feet

         “That’s what you get for calling us ‘Scum’ “ said the guy

         We three was in a tight situation, we should have listen to what Junpei said. I dunno what to do, I was scared. My whole body was trembling. I can’t even move. Please someone help us! Please! Help us!

         “That’s enough..”

         Then there’s a familiar voice coming from behind. That voice was belong to Shijiro-senpai, the young man we met at the hospital. He come forth and tell them to stop. But he didn’t listen and got head butt by the young man. Then, the guy leaves. I was surprised to see him again and also my fear gotten slowly calm down when he saves us. I dunno why my feelings filled with calmness and saved whenever I see him. I felt happy to see him again.

        “Oh man, Senpai, that was awesome!” Junpei said with a surprised look on his face

        “Hey, I remember you.. You clowns were in Aki’s room  at the hospital.” Shinjiro said with a surprised face look on his face

        “Clowns?” I said a bit pissed when he said that

        “You idiots! Get out of here this place is not belong for you.” He said ignoring my question by telling to get out and don’t come back here and he walk away from us until Yukari stopped him.

        “Wait! We came here for a reason.” Yukari said

        “Yeah!” I said out loud to Shinjiro. Then he turn his back and stare at us three

        “Did Aki send you here?” He said staring directly to me with a question

        “No, we came here with our own free will, Mitsuru-senpai and Akihiko-senpai doesn’t know we went to this dangerous place.” I said with courage by my said yet I felt a little happy that he talk to us and saved us.

        “Hmph..alright what you wanna know? About that ghost story?” He said while sitting on the staircase

        “Umm..yeah how’d you know?” Yukari replied but she a bit surprised

        Shinjiro-senpai told us all the information that we need. Unfortunately this Fuuka girl is missing for a week and she hasn’t come back from home yet. The girls that ended up in hospital were in the alley talking about Fuuka. So they were bullying her. The rumor is just a made up one. But Fuuka…no…she might not be dead yet…if she has the power. Then she might not be dead yet. The three of us decided to see the homeroom teacher of class 2E and ask about Fuuka.

        “Well that’s all I know” Shinjiro said

        “Thanks a lot for helping us and giving us some detail” I said smile warmly to him

        “I didn’t do nothing..” He replied “Just don’t come here again”

   

       He said suddenly disappeared slowly in front of my two eyes. I feel sad…when he left. Will I ever see him again? Or maybe I won’t…only faith decides I guess. So even if I can see him again or not…I just have to accept it. My top priority now is to save Fuuka. She must be still alive, no matter what I must save her. 

To be continued....

Meeting in first sight

          It’s been 26 days since I transferred school to Gekkoukan High School. I still remember the day where I arrived late to Iwatodai station on the 6^th of April 2009 and I got my Persona on the 9^th April 2009. Hahahaha…when think it back its pretty weird and exciting. A normal student like me possesses such power, a power that can defeat shadows. But what Igor said to me, my powers are pretty impressive because I can change any types of arcana during battle. It is kind of rare arcana to him. Because of this power, Mitsuru senpai pointed me as the leader of SEES team. SEES is Specialized Extracurricular Execution Squad. A squad that goes into Tartarus, a tower that only appear late night or should I call The Dark Hour. We still couldn’t find the answer on how the Tartarus and the Dark Hour exist in this land. But I have the feeling that we will find the answer we seek anytime soon.

       

           Well a few days later, in class after the school finish, Junpei said that Akihiko-senpai is at the hospital getting his arm checkup and he called him to get something for him.

      

        “Yup, he knows who to count on” he said with a big smile on his face

        “He only asked you cuz you don’t have anything else to do after school” Yukari said teasing Junpei kun even so what she said was the truth.

        “H-Hey, I resent that.” Junpei said looking at Yukari chan face

        “*giggle* I’m just kidding. So, what’d he want you to bring?” She said asking Junpei what was Akihiko-senpai request.

       “The class roster for 2E” Junpei answered

       “What’s he want that for?” Yukari said answered with a question that Junpei kun also don’t know. “Well, I don’t have practice today, so I’ll go with you. You’re coming to right Minako?” she asked

       “Definitely! ” I answered with a happy smile

       “Cool” Yukari smiled

       “W-Wait a minute…” Junpei said with a weird face

       “What? Is there a problem?” She asked

       “Well, it was ME he asked….” He answered with not a happy smile on his face.

       The three of us packed our bags and went to Tatsumi Memorial Hospital together bringing the class roster for 2E. When we arrived, an unfamiliar young man is here sitting on the bed instead of Akihiko-senpai. The man eyes look directly to us with no words coming out of his mouth. Junpei then bravely ask him.

       “Umm… Is… Akihiko-senpai…in this room? By any chance?” He said while looking at the young man

       “What are all of you guys doing here?” Akihiko-senpai said standing behind us

       “We came to see you” I answered

       “I’m just here for a checkup” He said with a warm smile

       “Is that it, Aki?” The mysterious man finally open his mouth after staring at us three long enough.

       “Yeah, thanks.” Akihiko-senpai answered the man question

       “Tch…I don’t have time for this shit.” The man said walk coolly while putting his hands on to his pocket jacket. “You..” The young man was on his way out when he stopped and stared at me.. “Never mind…” then he start walking straight to the door

       “W-Who was that?” Junpei ask Akihiko

       “A friend of mine from school..sort of. His name is Shinjiro Aragaki.” he answered “You know how Apathy Syndrome cases has been increasing? Well he knows a few people who are suffering from it, so I was asking him about it. Hey Junpei, did you bring what I ask for?” Akihiko explain and reminded Junpei if he bring what he ask for.

       “Yeah, of course senpai” Junpei answered

       While they were chit chatting, I was dozing off for a while, thinking on what happened back then. A question was in my head “Why he stopped and stared at me like that?” I said flashback on what happen. I dunno but when that young man did that, some odd feeling haunting my feelings. My heart was pumping a bit fast. When I woke up from my doziness, I saw that their chit chatting were ended. So the four of us went to the dorm together.

        After a few days, me, Yukari and Junpei are already getting useful with Tartarus. Well it does a bit of a pain in the ass to go there after school. It’s pretty tired and tough being the leader of the team, but I’m getting used to it now. Every day I feel I’m getting stronger too. Me, Yukari, Junpei, Mitsuru-senpai and Akihiko-senpai. Akihiko-senpai said that he found another girl that has the same persona like us 4. Her name was Fuuka Yamagishi, but she didn’t come to school for a week or 2 I think. The teacher and her homeroom classmate said she was sick. That’s what we all been believe in but there was something off. So at the dorm, on the dining table. Junpei start a conversation with Yukari about what he heard in school. It caught my intention. So I decide to hear Junpei story.

(OOC: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1S6UsY_4cFE a video clip of junpei’s believe it or don’t! Have fun! :D )

        “Hey Yuka-tan, have you seen the post on the student message board? You know how last week, that girl was found by the front gate of the school?” he said

        “Hmmm, sorry to bother, but can I know what you heard about it? I heard about it too but I dunno the details.” I said sitting beside Yukari

        “Well, there’s this rumor that it was an angry spirit from this one ghost story” He said saying it in the weird way

        “Angry spirit?” I said as I heard the word of angry spirit I already knew this just a made up story and I was already in excited mood. But I have no choice but to hear Junpei story.

       “H-Hey! C’mon… Nobody believes that stuff!?... R-Right?” Yukari said getting scared after what she heard.

       “So what is this ghost story about?”: Mitsuru senpai said heard our conversation.

            I just can’t believe that Mitsuru-senpai interested about this stuff! It really surprised me and even Akihiko-senpai interested on hearing about it too. Wow, I cant believe this. It’s a made up story senpai’s….Well because the senpai’s wants to hear the story, so it begins Junpei stupidness and stupid made up story. He even started with a weird voice of his and have a flashlight with him and I don’t even know where the hell did he get that flashlight.

           “Good evening. Welcome to Junpei’s Believe It, or Don’t. There are many strange things in this world. According to one story, if u get caught at school late at night, you’ll be devoured by a maniacal ghost that roams the hall!.” He said with his weird voice

            Interesting but still it’s made up, even the way he tell the story can tell. But he tried his best to be a story teller. Kinda funny though. *giggle* His story continues…

            “The other day this friend of mine—let’s call him Shu. He said to me “Junpei. I saw something strange.” He sounded so serious so I asked him what he’d seen. He said it was about a girl in to 2E. He claims he saw her go into the school on the night of the incident. I couldn’t believe it. She’s not the kind of girl to be out at night. But Shu was as white as a sheet. He insisted it was true. Then it hit me… that ghost must’ve tried to make her its dinner!” He said

            “(Oh boy)” I said to myself with a smile

            “And that’s why they found her lying on the ground by the gate! I felt a chill run down my spine, and I broke into a cold sweat. Yes there are strange things in this world. Believe it…or don’t…”

            And the story ends.. I feel like to want to roll on the floor laughing out loud. But that might be a bit rude. But some of his story caught about the girl in 2E. What she was doing in the school late at night. For me, it might not the ghost doing. She might be inside Tartarus and that’s how she found on the front gate. But still it wasn’t good enough information. Even Mitsuru-senpai and Akihiko-senpai got the point to. They seems serious about it.

           “Huh…? Not one word about my frankly amazing performance just now?” Junpei said feel a bit let down

           “It was a nice story Junpei kun” I said holding back my eager to laugh.

           “I think it’s worth investigating.” Akihiko said answered Mitsuru-senpai question

           “Wow I didn’t know u were afraid of ghost Yuka-tan. That’s kinda funny” Junpei turn to teased Yukari

           “Well your story is kinda funny too not that scary.” I said can’t hold it anymore

           “Heeyyyyy…” He said with his angry face

            “Hey watch it! I’m not afraid of anything. But fine let’s investigate. We’ll each ask around for the rest of the week. I’ll prove to you that this ghost story it’s just an urban legend.” Yukari said with determination on her eyes.

       

              So she didn’t accept  what Junpei said and she made a deal. She will go and getting some information about the story. Because of Junpei, he just flicked Yukari chan determination. But it’s fun seeing them happy and have some fun time. When seeing them happy, I dunno why my heart feels with sadness and sorrow. It’s like this moment won’t be last long enough. 

To Be Continued....

(OOC: Well i hope u guys enjoy still have some more of it. So stay tuned and leave a comment if anything. Thanks for reading guys!)

I dunno what to put as title

Assalammualaikum..Hello everyone! Saki here!! Its been months I didnt open my blog and post something in here. Well..the past few months, got some cry moments, stress, happy, fun, romantic..but the most of it is cry,stress and tension. This is my semester 4 in my college, now having a final exam..hope my results and pointer are ok. Well pls pray for it..really worried like hell now. before my final..there some tensioness around and cry around...to many assignments. Dont have time to go out..but i did go out lols.

             Well all the prob i had is in the past, when i think about it it is..really tension!!! and i know alia, mai chan, fadhleen and my other friends knows the feeling of tensioness. seresly..with finals coming up with many things to think about. Damn....i just hope my semester 5 is not a horror semester. PLS GOD!! PLS!!! make it easier!!! pls!!! *sobbing*! well enuf.. i dunt even remmber about semester 4 anymore lols.

             Semester break here.. as usual.. cleaning the house, watch tv, playing games, joke with my sister around, lovey lovey (LOL). Playing games..i kinda into it. I mean..i kinda love to play games. Its a place for me to forget about my problem. Sometimes i hear songs while playing game. Aika..its the first MMORPG game i ever played.. usually played XBOX 360 and play L4D2 with my sister. Well now my sister join the fun! hahahah she plays aika also! now i got someone to bully :P. but for now..might be a little lonely..cos Versailles member is vanish..well not all of them. Aika is boring a bit now cos no one there..i mean my friends not there. only new friends in AVC! (ALLVERCHANTED). ALL= ALLSTAR. VER=VERSAILLES. CHANTED= ENCHANTED. Versa is my home in aika..so many memories there. kinda sad when it got disband. It's my fault though cos i didn't pay the legion fees. Now just a lonely pally in versa there that's alive. I still remmeber when EvilHunter and MoonTwo make a prank with me! hahahah so funny! and Chloe call me BUNSAKI!! (Bunny + Saki= BUNSAKI).

              Now, I suddenly became just like Noobzs..take care of my friends character. AmeliaF, ChloeLueies, Noobzs, Maayu, Hneen, and my main sakinightlight. So many memories..of them...really miss you guys a lot. But really sorry if my post hurt your feelings. I'm ok dunt worry..I'm not playing that much hahahaha. Hope u guys are happy and in healthy shape. and ALIA!!!!! WHY U MISSING WOMEN!!! skype u no on fb no on SMS no reply! LOL! hahaha xD!! if i see you gonna hug you till i satisfied! xD ok i think thats enuf. gonna troll aroung youtube and see pewds video! the last video i saw is the karaoke! "DAMN~" <---hahahahahaha xD anyway take care guys, always been rain here.. hope u guys dont get any fever or cold :D. BROFIST everyone !! :D

Back-on "Tomorrow never knows" <--- love the song!!!

japan lyrics:-

Kono uta wo dareka ga kite tomoni mae ni susumetara

Ashita no koto nante wakaranai kedo
Kumo hitotsunai sora ni yuuki ga waite kuru
Kanashii kako nante fukitobaseru kara
Yes, I am!!!! aimai na egao nante mise’n na

Yesterday kasane ima wo kanade “ashita” tte iu mada minu kanata he
Mainichi ga SUTAATORAIN de kimochi bakka FURAINGU desu
Gakkou ikeba tsuppatte otona tte shakai ni mukatte TSUBA haite
Nanimo kangaezu hashittetakke demo ima yori ashita ni mukattetaze

Nanimo kangaenaide sugoshiteta
Kowai mono nante nanimo nakatta
Ano koro no kimochi ima mo mune ni nokotte masu ka? Tte kiku jibun ni
Iitai koto ga aru no ni iezu ni
Yaritai koto ga aru no ni dekizu ni
Hitasura jibun ni usotsuki genjitsu no kabe ni butsukatte kidzuku

Tomorrow never knows
Ashita no koto nante wakaranai kedo
Kumo hitotsunai sora ni yuuki ga waite kuru
Kanashii kako nante fukitobaseru kara
Yes, I am!!!! Aimai na egao nante mise’n na
Ashita ga aru sa tte iikikase
Dokomade ikeba ii ka wakaranakute
Demo bokura no tsubomi itsuka hana sakasu
Yeah, Yeah

The people gotta walk to
Sorezore no michi but never forget
Gaki no koro no ishi to imi to hibi
The spring always comes after the winter days
Namida no ato wa sou egao misete sugu ni

Ashita wo osorenaide “ashita ga aru sa!” tte warai tobashiteko~ze!

KARAPPO no KABAN ni daiji na kimochi tsumekonde susumu michinori!!

Akane-iro ni somari aruku michi
Boku wa hitori senaka wo marumete kotae sagashita
Ima wa, fuan to tachimukau chikara ga areba
Mayou koto wa nai kara

Tomorrow never knows
Ashita no koto nante wakaranai kara
Dakara “ima shikanai!” goto wo yareru dake yaru
Ame nochi hare watari kagayaku sekai
Suteta mon ja nai darou tooku made sono saki made

Tomorrow never knows
Tooi kaze ni nori tada asu no hou wo shikkari mitsume
Ryoute hiroge habatake
Tomorrow never knows
Baka ni sarete mo ii tada kono uta wo dareka ga kiite
Tomoni mae ni susumetara

Ashita no koto nante wakaranai kedo
Kumo hitotsunai sora ni yuuki ga waite kuru
Kanashii kako nante fukitobaseru kara
Yes, I am!!!! Aimai na egao nante mise’n na
Ashita ga aru sa tte iikikase
Dokomade ikeba ii ka wakaranakute
Demo bokura no tsubomi itsuka hana sakasu
Yeah, Yeah

Kono uta wo dareka ga kite tomoni mae ni susumetara    

English lyrics:-

I don't know about tomorrow, but
the sky without any clouds gives me the courage.
I can blow off the sad past,
yes I am, don't show a vague smile.


Yesterday I waited to see how tomorrow would play out
Feeling these emotions every day at the beginning
Spitting up at the adults in the school of society
Try to stop thinking and face tomorrow now


I never thought about anything
There was nothing to fear
What is this feeling in her heart? Listen to me
Not knowing what to say
Not knowing what to do
I find a wall of lies in my mind facing reality


Tomorrow never knows
I don't know about tomorrow, but
the sky without any clouds gives me the courage.
I can blow off the sad past,
yes I am, don't show a vague smile.
I tell myself that I have tomorrow
I don't know how far I should go 
but our flower buds will bloom someday, yeah yeah.


The people gotta walk to
every road but never forget
The meaning and intention of the sun, as a kid
The spring always comes after the winter days
After a tear a smile will show up


(Don't be afraid,there will be a tomorrow!) There will be loud cheers!


We take a step forward with our feelings packed in a bag


We walk around this road
Looking for an answer
With all my power, I will confront my anxiety
And I will not hesitate


Tomorrow never knows
I don't know about tomorrow so
That's why (only now) this must be done
The world will shine after the rain
We're not too far off of the abandoned gate


Tomorrow never knows
Tomorrow I will ride the great wind
as I flap my hands
Tomorrow never knows
If someone will hopefully hear this song
untill the end


I don't know about tomorrow, but
the sky without any clouds gives me the courage.
I can blow off the sad past,
yes I am, don't show a vague smile.
I tell myself that I have tomorrow
I don't know how far I should go 
but our flower buds will bloom someday, yeah yeah.

Thanks to shiro senpai for giving me the song and make my sad go away!!! hahaha i love the song!!! :) THANK YOU!!! THANK YOU!!!!~ <3 <3

Doesn't have the mood to do my story! seresly i've been having bad mood this days!!

       Well......*sigh* really in a bad mood! i dunno why it just came to me automatically. D<  i really hate when i'm feeling bad mood. Need sometime alone....i'll go kick some fucking monsters butt on AIKA!!

I want to rolepay as Zack Fair ~ >3

ok the reason why i want to roleplay as Zack fair..cos his personality is just the same as Saki Sumaku~ <-- my OC. He never gives up~ He always moving forward to the future..even so he lost his own friend, buddy, or a father that is Angeal Hewley. He keeps fighting.. fighting~ He was suffering a lot in the game. (Final Fantasy: Crisis Core). His girlfriend is Aerith Gainsborough. She's very beautiful, kind, and her smile is like an angel~ seresly!? even i fall in love with this Aerith character.  

                                           

This scene was where zack cried becos he lost Angeal..he wants to hold back his tears. but Aerith hugs him and let him cried~ T^T

this is the sad scene that make me cried.In Midgar, Tseng orders Turks to find Zack before making Shinra soldiers, hoping to save them. As it nears the Wastelands, Zack and Cloud hidden preparing to fight. In the final battle, Zack was mortally wounded in the chest. Shortly thereafter, Cloud embedded outside its vegetative state, but has poisoned by Mako. He approaches Zack, Cloud pull his head in the chest, Zack gives his Buster Sword and tells him to survive. Zack then dies, and Cloud, Even with a huge burden on his heart, and later through Zack bids him farewell, and he takes the Buster Sword and walk towards Midgar, looking for work as mercenary as Zack. In the end Zack says that he "Finally be a Hero". well that's all~ isk..isk..sorry if there was a mistake~ it's has been long since i didn't play it. :) bye bye T^T i'll put a sad song on my song list~ a song on the sad scene.

for akma

“Misa..” the gentle voices calling her name, she started to look around trying to find someone, but none. There’s no one here in this room accept (for) her. She even didn’t realize where is she.<--( She even didn’t realize where she is)   The surroundings look plain and white. Her hearts feel the beat..fast.

                “where am i? where is everybody?”ß(Where am I? Where is everybody)  Her eyes keep the surrounding trying to find her friends.

They’re maybe lost, but impossible. The places seems ß(The place seems…) unique, like you’re standing in the centre of the snow field. Feel nothing but afraid ß(Feels nothing but fear). Once again she heard the same voices, the voices seems like too far away,ß( Once again she heard the same voice and the sound of the voice is too far away.) It’s just soft to hear but still clear ß(It’s just too soft to hear but can still hear it clearly) . “Misa senpai!!” Misaki take a few step ahead, looking the surrounding, trying to find the persons voices. She didn’t feel anything that time. She feelß(feels) like she walked at the same places. “who’s there?!! “ß(Who’s there!?)  She shouted “ARRIIAA!! YUFFIIEE!! SSAAKKII CCHHAANN!!” She shouted again calling her friends.

Misaki didn’t give up, her feet started to make a move, taking a thousand steps to find them, even it was so hard but at least she try. The places seems to be hugeß(the place is so huge) and there is no end of it. Her voices become lower. She can’t continue herself, even push herself. Her body becomeß(becomes) weak. She suddenly lying on the ground, the tears run out fast touched her soft cheeksß(her tears runs out so fast that touches her soft cheeks). “w-where is everybody……” this is the end?

…………………………………………………………………………………………………………

The birds seems to enjoy itself, flying freely (to) feel the freedom. Even the people look so busy with their daily live. Like usual on weekends Misaki will stay with her father. It’s been 3 years after they divorces. Adult  problem, Misaki will never entered. She doesn’t like being busybody with other people problem, plus making the huge probs, not her interested ß(Adult’s problem of course and she won’t participate any of the problems because she dislike being a busybody to other people’s problem. It’s not one of her style). She understand and she didn’t want to get someone burden or someone who taking a hard time because of herß( She understand and she doesn’t want to make that person to have all the burden and takes a hard time because of her).

“Misa, I’m really really sorry, just now my clients callß(called) me. I need to go. But I promise I’ll be back home early, and we’ll have a dinner together.”Mr.Kiryuu Hanase need to go for a workß(needs to go to work) in the weekends after his clients making such probs,ß( , buang) when he wantß(wanted) to spend more time with his beloved daughter. “Don’t worry dad. I understand, I can take care of myself, I’m grown up enough.” She smile trying not to make her father worried about her. Her father smiled as he look at Misa, then  He kissß(kisses) her forehead before leaving. Feeling guilty leave her daughter aloneß(Her father feels guilty to leave her daughter alone in such a nice day).  Misaki just stared until the door shut.  “I can’t blame him.” She ß(She’s) already getting used to it when her parents has an outstation. She understandß(understands) their hardworkß(hard work) for their only beloved daughter.

People always think that she’s a kid who need a protection from her parents and her life don’t have such a fun and enjoyingß(she doesn’t have a fun and enjoying life), but who cares. Misaki still happy become one of it even she’s already 18 years old.

Misaki just sitting and watching through the windows, just the same all weekends, nothing much changed. But then, her eyes pointed on the scene, where the 2 guys trying to make a worse nightmare at the weird looking girl. She was like shocked and trying to look for the other who walking that way they were nowß(She was shocked looking for someone from left to right to help the poor girl), but no oneß(but there was no one). Seems like the problems will goes to herß(Seems like she’s the one who have to take care of those bastards{LOL sorry for the harsh word}). She running down the stairs and finding something to use as a weapon. Not to far from her apartment. She running fast and take the first attack from the head using the old baseball stick! Getting from the trashß(She runs as fast as she can and give a nice hit to the head of the two using an old baseball that she took from the trash). “take that!!” then using her high level kicked. The 2 guys fall on the ground, trying to get up straight and then theyß(they buang) run away like a chicken.

The people knowsß(knew) Misaki with her natural personality but still her high level kudo can’t beat by anyone accept Kota Fujiko her classmate and her childhood friends, he seems to popular in school neither college with his looks, but that didn’t make Misaki fallen like the other girls.  Never show her girlish type. Even so her parents has a lot of money to buy aß(an) expensive dress and blouse. But still she like ß(likes) to wear a t-shirts and the half trousers, that makes her  feel comfortable. Using the money when we need, that her tagline.

Correction:- “ß(…….)” tanda ni maksudnyer ayat yg betul klau ni “(….)” ayat tertinggal

1.” There’s no one here in this room accept (for) her”. You forgot the for

2. She even didn’t realize where is sheß( She also didn’t realize where she is).

3. “where am i? where is everybody?”ß(Where am I? Where is everybody?)  

4. The places seems uniqueß(The place seems unique),

5. Feel nothing but afraid ß(Feels nothing but fear)

6. Once again she heard the same voices, the voices seems like too far away,ß( Once again she heard the same voice and the sound of the voice is too far away.)

7. It’s just soft to hear but still clear ß(It’s just too soft to hear but can still hear it clearly).

8. She feelß( She feels)…

9. “who’s there?!! “ß(Who’s there!?) 

10. The places seems to be hugeß(the place is so huge)….

11. Her body becomeß(becomes)…

12….. the tears run out fast touched her soft cheeksß(her tears runs out so fast that touches her soft cheeks).

13….. flying freely (to) feel the freedom.

14. Adult  problem, Misaki will never entered. She doesn’t like being busybody with other people problem, plus making the huge probs, not her interested ß(Adult’s problem of course and she won’t participate any of the problems because she dislike being a busybody to other people’s problem. It’s not one of her style).

15. She understand and she didn’t want to get someone burden or someone who taking a hard time because of herß( She understand and she doesn’t want to make that person to have all the burden and takes a hard time because of her)

16….. just now my clients callß(called) me

17. …need to go for a workß(needs to go to work)….

18. probs,ß( comma buang)

19. He kissß(kisses)…

20. Feeling guilty leave her daughter aloneß(Her father feels guilty to leave her daughter alone in such a nice day)

21. She ß(She’s)…

22. understandß(understands)…

23. hardworkß(hard work)

24. her life don’t have such a fun and enjoyingß(she doesn’t have a fun and enjoying life)

25. She was like shocked and trying to look for the other who walking that way they were nowß(She was shocked looking for someone from left to right to help the poor girl),

26. but no oneß(but there was no one)

27. Seems like the problems will goes to herß(Seems like she’s the one who have to take care of those bastards{LOL sorry for the harsh word})

28. She running fast and take the first attack from the head using the old baseball stick! Getting from the trashß(She runs as fast as she can and give a nice hit to the head of the two using an old baseball that she took from the trash)

29. theyß(they buang)

30. knowsß(knew)

31. aß(an)

32. like ß(likes)

Well that should do it~ the story is really interesting!! I like it!!! if you don’t know the right word try using google or do the story in word first~ Ok!!!! XDD interesting story and keep up the good work~ sorry if I make you sad after you read this~ ok? *sad*