for akma

“Misa..” the gentle voices calling her name, she started to look around trying to find someone, but none. There’s no one here in this room accept (for) her. She even didn’t realize where is she.<--( She even didn’t realize where she is)   The surroundings look plain and white. Her hearts feel the beat..fast.

                “where am i? where is everybody?”ß(Where am I? Where is everybody)  Her eyes keep the surrounding trying to find her friends.

They’re maybe lost, but impossible. The places seems ß(The place seems…) unique, like you’re standing in the centre of the snow field. Feel nothing but afraid ß(Feels nothing but fear). Once again she heard the same voices, the voices seems like too far away,ß( Once again she heard the same voice and the sound of the voice is too far away.) It’s just soft to hear but still clear ß(It’s just too soft to hear but can still hear it clearly) . “Misa senpai!!” Misaki take a few step ahead, looking the surrounding, trying to find the persons voices. She didn’t feel anything that time. She feelß(feels) like she walked at the same places. “who’s there?!! “ß(Who’s there!?)  She shouted “ARRIIAA!! YUFFIIEE!! SSAAKKII CCHHAANN!!” She shouted again calling her friends.

Misaki didn’t give up, her feet started to make a move, taking a thousand steps to find them, even it was so hard but at least she try. The places seems to be hugeß(the place is so huge) and there is no end of it. Her voices become lower. She can’t continue herself, even push herself. Her body becomeß(becomes) weak. She suddenly lying on the ground, the tears run out fast touched her soft cheeksß(her tears runs out so fast that touches her soft cheeks). “w-where is everybody……” this is the end?

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The birds seems to enjoy itself, flying freely (to) feel the freedom. Even the people look so busy with their daily live. Like usual on weekends Misaki will stay with her father. It’s been 3 years after they divorces. Adult  problem, Misaki will never entered. She doesn’t like being busybody with other people problem, plus making the huge probs, not her interested ß(Adult’s problem of course and she won’t participate any of the problems because she dislike being a busybody to other people’s problem. It’s not one of her style). She understand and she didn’t want to get someone burden or someone who taking a hard time because of herß( She understand and she doesn’t want to make that person to have all the burden and takes a hard time because of her).

“Misa, I’m really really sorry, just now my clients callß(called) me. I need to go. But I promise I’ll be back home early, and we’ll have a dinner together.”Mr.Kiryuu Hanase need to go for a workß(needs to go to work) in the weekends after his clients making such probs,ß( , buang) when he wantß(wanted) to spend more time with his beloved daughter. “Don’t worry dad. I understand, I can take care of myself, I’m grown up enough.” She smile trying not to make her father worried about her. Her father smiled as he look at Misa, then  He kissß(kisses) her forehead before leaving. Feeling guilty leave her daughter aloneß(Her father feels guilty to leave her daughter alone in such a nice day).  Misaki just stared until the door shut.  “I can’t blame him.” She ß(She’s) already getting used to it when her parents has an outstation. She understandß(understands) their hardworkß(hard work) for their only beloved daughter.

People always think that she’s a kid who need a protection from her parents and her life don’t have such a fun and enjoyingß(she doesn’t have a fun and enjoying life), but who cares. Misaki still happy become one of it even she’s already 18 years old.

Misaki just sitting and watching through the windows, just the same all weekends, nothing much changed. But then, her eyes pointed on the scene, where the 2 guys trying to make a worse nightmare at the weird looking girl. She was like shocked and trying to look for the other who walking that way they were nowß(She was shocked looking for someone from left to right to help the poor girl), but no oneß(but there was no one). Seems like the problems will goes to herß(Seems like she’s the one who have to take care of those bastards{LOL sorry for the harsh word}). She running down the stairs and finding something to use as a weapon. Not to far from her apartment. She running fast and take the first attack from the head using the old baseball stick! Getting from the trashß(She runs as fast as she can and give a nice hit to the head of the two using an old baseball that she took from the trash). “take that!!” then using her high level kicked. The 2 guys fall on the ground, trying to get up straight and then theyß(they buang) run away like a chicken.

The people knowsß(knew) Misaki with her natural personality but still her high level kudo can’t beat by anyone accept Kota Fujiko her classmate and her childhood friends, he seems to popular in school neither college with his looks, but that didn’t make Misaki fallen like the other girls.  Never show her girlish type. Even so her parents has a lot of money to buy aß(an) expensive dress and blouse. But still she like ß(likes) to wear a t-shirts and the half trousers, that makes her  feel comfortable. Using the money when we need, that her tagline.

Correction:- “ß(…….)” tanda ni maksudnyer ayat yg betul klau ni “(….)” ayat tertinggal

1.” There’s no one here in this room accept (for) her”. You forgot the for

2. She even didn’t realize where is sheß( She also didn’t realize where she is).

3. “where am i? where is everybody?”ß(Where am I? Where is everybody?)  

4. The places seems uniqueß(The place seems unique),

5. Feel nothing but afraid ß(Feels nothing but fear)

6. Once again she heard the same voices, the voices seems like too far away,ß( Once again she heard the same voice and the sound of the voice is too far away.)

7. It’s just soft to hear but still clear ß(It’s just too soft to hear but can still hear it clearly).

8. She feelß( She feels)…

9. “who’s there?!! “ß(Who’s there!?) 

10. The places seems to be hugeß(the place is so huge)….

11. Her body becomeß(becomes)…

12….. the tears run out fast touched her soft cheeksß(her tears runs out so fast that touches her soft cheeks).

13….. flying freely (to) feel the freedom.

14. Adult  problem, Misaki will never entered. She doesn’t like being busybody with other people problem, plus making the huge probs, not her interested ß(Adult’s problem of course and she won’t participate any of the problems because she dislike being a busybody to other people’s problem. It’s not one of her style).

15. She understand and she didn’t want to get someone burden or someone who taking a hard time because of herß( She understand and she doesn’t want to make that person to have all the burden and takes a hard time because of her)

16….. just now my clients callß(called) me

17. …need to go for a workß(needs to go to work)….

18. probs,ß( comma buang)

19. He kissß(kisses)…

20. Feeling guilty leave her daughter aloneß(Her father feels guilty to leave her daughter alone in such a nice day)

21. She ß(She’s)…

22. understandß(understands)…

23. hardworkß(hard work)

24. her life don’t have such a fun and enjoyingß(she doesn’t have a fun and enjoying life)

25. She was like shocked and trying to look for the other who walking that way they were nowß(She was shocked looking for someone from left to right to help the poor girl),

26. but no oneß(but there was no one)

27. Seems like the problems will goes to herß(Seems like she’s the one who have to take care of those bastards{LOL sorry for the harsh word})

28. She running fast and take the first attack from the head using the old baseball stick! Getting from the trashß(She runs as fast as she can and give a nice hit to the head of the two using an old baseball that she took from the trash)

29. theyß(they buang)

30. knowsß(knew)

31. aß(an)

32. like ß(likes)

Well that should do it~ the story is really interesting!! I like it!!! if you don’t know the right word try using google or do the story in word first~ Ok!!!! XDD interesting story and keep up the good work~ sorry if I make you sad after you read this~ ok? *sad*